GO TO MY COMIC!!!!!! >.<


But seriously, I would like it if you checked it out. From the beginning.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Naive/index.php?p=37308


Ironically, there's a Snakes on a Plane reference on the first and most recent page.

Well, tell me what you think. And tell your friends, that would be nice as well.

Where be the jubblies?

just joking.

My favourite bit will always be when that guy turned emo XD

Oh, so what you're saying is to not make it so obvious like them going "I am happy". Can you give me some pointers on how to hint their feelings without telemagraphing their dialogue?

Any other critques?

I think you've got a nice start here. I agree with what has been said already. my biggest advice for you right now.....

Relax, have a good time. Skills will come with practice. I like what you're doing it's a lot of fun and I will keep an eye on ya! Great Job!

One of the most basic tips for seqesntial artists is this: you should get the "gist" of whats going on WITHOUT word bubbles. Maybe take your stuff before you letter it and have a friend try to describe what's going on. Whatever they mix up will help you to correct those gray areas in your comic.