My cameos
And yes it doesn't have much cameos... Anyway, my first comic sucked. Then i started a new one.
What do you think of it. Now also asking for sprites...
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[CRIT] My cameo's
jef dam5
at 12:47PM, Aug. 15, 2006
Als je Nederlands of Belgisch bent kun je dit verstaan.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
Mimarin
at 12:55PM, Aug. 15, 2006
Ok, A sprite comic, a very plain and stereotypical sprite comic, this comic breaks all of the fundimental laws of how not to make a sprite comic.
there are characters from multiple universes acting in a storyline that takes place outside any of those storylines, early pages have 2 tone backgrounds, there is zero humour, zero entertainment value, no origional sprites, Bad Dialogue and 4th wall breaking.
It fits the catagory of "a crap sprite comic"
there are characters from multiple universes acting in a storyline that takes place outside any of those storylines, early pages have 2 tone backgrounds, there is zero humour, zero entertainment value, no origional sprites, Bad Dialogue and 4th wall breaking.
It fits the catagory of "a crap sprite comic"
Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.
Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!
Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:02PM
jef dam5
at 1:30PM, Aug. 15, 2006
Thank you for your motivating speech.
The storyline is all coming together as includes the fourth wall breaking. And as for the rest you should give an example.
Anyways thanks for this kind of backstabbing critism (though you won't hear that much i guess)
The storyline is all coming together as includes the fourth wall breaking. And as for the rest you should give an example.
Anyways thanks for this kind of backstabbing critism (though you won't hear that much i guess)
Als je Nederlands of Belgisch bent kun je dit verstaan.
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Comicmasta
at 1:38PM, Aug. 15, 2006
Im a spriter myself and i have to say i was ......
What are the words for it....
Frightened..
Furious...
Laughing my ass off?
Aha just kidding with that last one. I am sorry but this sprite comic sucks to the lowest low can go....maybe even lower.
Plus like Mimarin said it has sprites from other games all in one....this sucks worst then my sprite comic.
What are the words for it....
Frightened..
Furious...
Laughing my ass off?
Aha just kidding with that last one. I am sorry but this sprite comic sucks to the lowest low can go....maybe even lower.
Plus like Mimarin said it has sprites from other games all in one....this sucks worst then my sprite comic.
i have been brought back....The Boanitia..grrrrr.....Must find Super Jesus!!!!!
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:43AM
jef dam5
at 1:41PM, Aug. 15, 2006
Als je Nederlands of Belgisch bent kun je dit verstaan.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
jef dam5
at 5:30AM, Sept. 12, 2006
Als je Nederlands of Belgisch bent kun je dit verstaan.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
Egnio
at 11:37AM, Sept. 12, 2006
Kennedy0
Sometimes the best kind of practice is reading bad comics and trying not to do what they do. Avoid cliches.
True, but I actually improved when I saw better comics than mine. A little motivation never hurts.
There's a virus or bug that prevents me from looking at most images on any internet browser I use, so, when I clicked on your link, i couldn't look at the comic, but the banner of it appeared. If I had a cookie for every time I've seen those 3 characters on the same comic, I'd be considered the owner of the factory (the fact that Sonic wasn't on it amazed me). What I've heard of it is bad, but yet again equinox says that it improved. I'll look at it when I get to my house (1 hour and half of school to go).
And please, don't try to make yours look better by saying that yours is not the worse. I've seen many bad comics, and a bad comic is a bad comic, no matter if others are worse. Yet, I've seen some that purposely were made bad, to make fun at those who make bad comics, don't admit it and refuse to change. Once you improve, you can say prodly that you have a good comic, but don't ever say that there are worse than yours. it may be true, but trying to fit as a greater comic maker will make you look bad.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:19PM
jef dam5
at 10:04AM, Sept. 13, 2006
Yeah i know. I regret that post now :( The fact is that i was at the time still a noobie :(
Als je Nederlands of Belgisch bent kun je dit verstaan.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:07PM
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