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[CRIT] Minion - A Fantasy/Comedy
Hguyver at 4:49PM, June 8, 2007
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Okay, I've really been dreading putting up the '' for this... Well here goes.

Summery: Follow the adventures of the dark witch Meryl and her werewolf minion Gin as they fend off overly affectionate vampires, rival witches, dangerous dungeons and annoying village kids looking for adventure.

Currently at a total 40 pages as of 6-08-07.

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Hguyver at 1:55AM, July 22, 2007
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Okay let's try this again... Maybe I might hear from someone this time.

54 pages as of July 20th.
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BlkKnight at 3:07PM, July 22, 2007
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Your strip is one of my favorites, so that's never a bad thing. The flow and pacing are great, the art is good, and the dialog is well written. As for something negative, the characters' actions are somewhat predictable. For example, I was expecting the kids to stow away in some manner in this latest arc. However, I don't see it as a major problem right now but keep it in mind as the comic progresses.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
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DerrickEwing at 4:37PM, July 22, 2007
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Great job man. I can't think of anything bad about this comic.

I love the character development.

BlkKnight said: "the characters' actions are somewhat predictable."
I find that It's good for people to feel that your Character's actions are predictable.

I can't wait to see Gin turn into a Wolf!!!!
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BlkKnight at 9:27PM, July 23, 2007
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I'm not saying that predictability is a bad thing. However, if at comic 300 the kids are still being told not to go with Gin and Meryl and they stow away for the fifth time, then it might be getting old. I was honestly pulling at strings for something negative.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
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Hguyver at 12:14PM, July 24, 2007
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Wow, I'm glad to hear you guys like it. And don't worry about the predictability thing BlkKnight. It's not going to be a repetative thing like that. The story and characters will grow with each situation.

Man, this awesome. I love hearing what you guys think.
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Tantz Aerine at 7:17AM, July 25, 2007
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I love that strip :) It's funny and it always gets at least a smile out of me :)
 
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