Last spring I began a comic called, yes, Metrophor with my brother. Now it's been a good few months, and I want to step back and get some honest opinions on it. In particular, I'd like to get some critiques on the art style. Now I should first say that, yeah, I know some of the action is confusing. What is more important is a critique in the CHANGES in the shading style. I've gone through several changes in a concerted effort to make things clearer. I'm pretty happy with the current style, which I've only implimented with the last strip or two, but other thoughts would be greatly appreciated.

And while you're at it, of course, feel free to critique other aspects of the comic that pique your interest/ire!

The link's in my sig.