To keep my post shorter, here's links to the pictures I'd like critiqued!

Lineart: http://zvart.deviantart.com/#/d3fkz1o
Colored with Lines: http://zvart.deviantart.com/#/d3fkza8
Colored without Lines: http://zvart.deviantart.com/art/Marie-Cover-Colored-no-lines-207571781

The line art is what I am thinking of using for my serious webcomic, and I'm torn between the lined/unlined colored ones as covers for the chapters. Any help - whether with style or choosing - would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!!

(Also my thanks to Aeon here on DD and iceytina on DA for a Hair Coloring Tutorial and GIMP Grass Brush respectively!)