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[Crit] Life on the I
jahn178 at 4:53PM, Aug. 25, 2008
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Hi everyone!!!
Here is my latest webcomic life on the I. check it out and give me as much feedback as possible, positive and negative!!! thank you for your help and i hope to hear from you soon. here is the link

http://www.drunkduck.com/Life_on_the_I/
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:06PM
jahn178 at 11:00AM, Aug. 27, 2008
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bump!

because i have not gotten a crit yet. please i would really appreciate one
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jahn178 at 6:57AM, Aug. 29, 2008
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bump!
please, i really don't want to keep bumping, i would just like 1 review. thankyou.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:06PM
BlkKnight at 5:57PM, Aug. 29, 2008
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There really isn't much to review there. Once you get more pages up a proper review could be done.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
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Puff_Of_Smoke at 12:45PM, Aug. 30, 2008
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If I were to review it as is, I'd say that the comic isn't really well drawn. Humour's great though.
I
I have a gun. It's really powerful. Especially against living things.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:55PM

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