Hey! I'd like critique on my comic here at DD if you guys would be so kind. It's a sprite comic, but don't write it off just yet. I've made 5 strips so it's a quick read. Please give tips/advice.

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Well, I can't give much constructive opinion on this.

The Art side is good, I have no doubts about that, but the story is... well I do not feel it. Maybe if I had more panels to study I would see if this is heading anywhere... at the moment it's a a falling brick from the twentieth floor (for me).

I might lack taste... but that's the way I am.

WriterX

All right thanks. I'll try to make more strips with more than 3-4 panels.

Ok, I'm no pro, but i see your 2 major problems with this comic....

1 - Its a sprite comic..... About 90% of DD'ers HATE sprite comics..... It just seems like a copout...

2 - Its a fancomic... Those are also not so famous here.......

So essentially you will have a fan base of other spriters... and thats it.... if your happy with that, then continue.... if your not, then try your hand at creating your own characters, and drawing your own art.....

Well I can make drawn strips, but I don't have a mean of getting the art onto my computer. I don't have a scanner.