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[CRIT] How Gruesome
VGFox
at 1:24PM, June 25, 2006
A little comic I made about bunny people and their horrible, HORRIBLE daily lives. Post what you think, I'd love to hear it. Besides, reviews are like the sweet nectar of the Greek Gods to me.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:40PM
Mimarin
at 1:42PM, June 25, 2006
It's just bad, i kept trying to think of witty or constructive ways of putting it, but i couldnt think of anything that was really appropriate, it's just alot of nothing but bad.
the whole theme is cheesy and overused. it just reeks of Happy tree friends, retarded animal babies and all that crap. there are only two pages so far, but the art is downright poor and bland. the comic isnt funny, It just lacks anything good at all.
the whole theme is cheesy and overused. it just reeks of Happy tree friends, retarded animal babies and all that crap. there are only two pages so far, but the art is downright poor and bland. the comic isnt funny, It just lacks anything good at all.
Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.
Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!
Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:02PM
VGFox
at 5:58PM, June 25, 2006
In my excitement to finally get a comic I made recongnized, I forget to put a link. Here it is www.drunkduck.com/How_Gruesome .
Also, try not to judge from the first comic, I'm planning on adding things other than violence, and we'll see how that works out.
Also, try not to judge from the first comic, I'm planning on adding things other than violence, and we'll see how that works out.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:40PM
lefarce
at 6:34PM, June 25, 2006
How are we supposed to review it if we can't base anything off of the first page? Thats half the comic, at this point. Thats stupid, I'm sorry to say it but it is.
Hiding issues doesn't look good on you. It makes it seem, even before reading, that your comic is utter crap.
As for the comic... There are only two "issues" so I can't say much... but so far, there is allot to be done. The art is sloppy, and the text is hard to read. I don't find the comic funny. It just feels like I'm reading a bad comic version of Happy Tree Friends.
I wouldn't really say "stop making comics for the love of god!". But it needs work... and ass loads of it!
Try taking time to practice drawing and writing, get photoshop, a better scanner, and don't wast people's time if you don't even want them to read half the damn thing.
Hiding issues doesn't look good on you. It makes it seem, even before reading, that your comic is utter crap.
As for the comic... There are only two "issues" so I can't say much... but so far, there is allot to be done. The art is sloppy, and the text is hard to read. I don't find the comic funny. It just feels like I'm reading a bad comic version of Happy Tree Friends.
I wouldn't really say "stop making comics for the love of god!". But it needs work... and ass loads of it!
Try taking time to practice drawing and writing, get photoshop, a better scanner, and don't wast people's time if you don't even want them to read half the damn thing.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:30PM
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