Hi, this comic has been fermenting in my head for awhile now, and I just got the means to put it out there for the "world" to see. I know it's done in pencil and it's not colored due to me not having photoshop, though I must say I'm fixing to start inking my pages, PROPERLY...don't want another disaster like last time. But hopefully the artwork is good enough and I do take a stab at detail...most of the time. XD Anywho. CRIT me as hard as you mofos can! I wanna know what's thought about my work. Does it suck completely and need to be burned? Or...is it cool enough to stick around for a few more chapters? I can take alot of bad responses as long as they are totally honest and not just a chance to make a stranger feel bad. -Waits for your info, notepad ready, brain semi-functional-

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