I just want to see what everybody thinks of my comic so far The link is in my signature. The only thing i can say is my lines need work and my first issue had some typos but im trying to remedy all of that. I might go to a new schedule soon If daily is too much for me but so far this schedule i have been on seems to have workes for me nicely.

Awwww!

Your coloring is pretty nice, and I love the effects on each page. Like, on some of the pages you add shading, which gives a more solid feeling to your characters and makes them much more than just scribbles on a page. ^_^ You deserve congrats on the first chapter cover. I have yet to read chapter 2, though. ;P I'll catch up. In fact, I just started reading not too long ago.

Yes, your lines need some work. Maybe you should make them bolder?

PS: By the way, would you mind checking out my comic too? Thanks. ;P

Thank you!