I would love to know what you guys think (ie what is working/what is not working), please be brutally honest (that is the only way I can ever make my comic better).

http://72.32.106.254/Fire_Brand/?p=77503 [72.32.106.254]

Way to not post a link.

Sorry. I forgot, posted it now; enjoy

Since there are only two pages, it is really hard to know what the story is about. It'd be nice, as well if you had a lot of variation in the comic panels such as some are bigger than the others, if you are going for something other than a strip comic -- it allows the reader's attention to be drawn to the more important panels, which would be the bigger ones and the less important would be the smaller ones. If you can spend more time on it to make the artwork nicer, it doesn't necessarily need to be in color either. Your figures are sort of blocky, and since generally they aren't human, I don't really know if that is their form, but generally human-baseed figures are made from a bunch of circles, meanign their forms should be more smooth. It'd also be better if you get some more dynamic angling. I don't really know what is going on in the second page on the top two panels, but maybe it will come to notice later on in the comic? In the first page, the last panel, you also have a typo. I see that you are coming up with an interesting race here, but for a critique, you really need more pages so tha we can flesh out a story, but those are my points you need to improve on, on hand. There are also a lot of other things you can improve on, like the background and such, but work on mainly for now, putting up different size panels and rendering your characters some more.

Kay? Keep up the good work. =D