Hey all you drunk duckers, I want everyones honest opinion about my comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Farmillia

Wow, your comic contains real great writing!
The artwork is good enough, it shows you absolutely got talent. But I dunno, your characters look often kind of... stiff (I don't know if that's the right word). That's something you should keep a look at when making a story. It didn't bother me too much when I was reading it tough, so just keep up the good work and eventually the characters and their actions will be just right.
As for another point: maybe use a little thicker lines. This is just a small point, but I'm just trying to find the things that will make it better, not meaning that I'm that great ('cause I kinda suck :P )

well i just read your comic and your comic is just stylized.

Krensada
well i just read your comic and your comic is just stylized.

I hope you're not picking on Dutchman, that would be very rude since he gave you a good opinion and he was very complimentary.

-your link turned up nothing so I've fixed it for you.

Your comic isn't bad, but Dutchman's right on the thicker lines, that would really help things. :)

I liked it kinda reminds me of thundercats go LIONOS!!! I mean Kenda

Well it doesn't haelp me that A yes Kenda has orange hair B Yes kenda looks like a cat, and C Yes he weilds a sword (which hasn't been seen yet) and D I loved Thundercats as a kid.

about duchman i didnt insult him.

Krensada
Well it doesn't haelp me that A yes Kenda has orange hair B Yes kenda looks like a cat, and C Yes he weilds a sword (which hasn't been seen yet) and D I loved Thundercats as a kid.

The first time I threw cat people into a story, I heard the same thing.

DUDE...THUNDER CATS



I like the story, very creative.
---just run with it.

I have been trying to come out with a page every day...I hope you all are enjoying it. Im doing this for all of you! :)

I wanted to second Crazy Dutchman's commnets. Look into "line weight" (http://www.tokyopop.com/141.html ), it will give your drawings more depth. I agree the posing looks a little stiff at times and there appeared to me to be slight anatomy issues with some poses. I'd also like to see more dramatic framing and more creative layout.

But all of this said, your work shows you have a lot of talent, keep at it.

Thanks!