I really need some comments on this, it started out in MS paint but now im upgrading to my pencil stuff and coloring :3
Anyway, so read through the first couple and get to the end please, thank you.
Oh, ok, its about a young mercenary who only lives for two things, revenge and finding her lost friends- the other experiments and all that keeps her sane is hoping that some of them are alive. Meanwhile she's looking for her father who was the one who made her and all the people close to her experiments.
Read it please ^_^ even though its only six pages long so far i guarentee it gets better :3

http://www.drunkduck.com/Experiment_Twenty_KATCH/

Looks pretty good so far. I am impressed with your work in paint, it looks very good, much better than I can do with the program. My main critique is how when you switched to using the pencil outlines, those outlines are very light and faded. This makes the distiction between the characters and the backgrounds and the panels difficult to see and a bit confusing. It might help if there was more distiction between the panels on page 6, and darker outlines overall.

As far as the story, it looks very interesting so far. It jumps right into the action and I'm very currious to see what happens next. I really like page 5 with the werebadger and the colors work very well. Good luck with your comic! I hope I was able to help.

Thank you very much~!!