PLEASE LEAVE A SOMETHING ABOUT IT! IT JUST STARTED BUT HEY!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Daughter_Of_A_God/index.php?p=234255

SUre I will, if you check out mine!

okay!

How do you add freinds cause I wanted to add you and my friend that showed this website to me...

check the e-mail i sent you.

TOASTER PAWNAGE!

Looks pretty good.

thanks ^.^

could anyone else please cretique my comic?
the lis above or below ^.^

Three pages makes it a bit difficult to critique anything, but it looks like it has potential. Your cinematic drawing skills are pretty good.

Hmm, critique? Okay.
You've made spelling and grammar errors for a start, 'onwords' instead of 'onwards', 'breath' instead of 'breathe' 'agains' rather than 'against' being examples (be careful of that breathe one, since breath is a word, the spell checker won't pick it up) . The idea that the quote was by an ancient Japanese Shaman makes no sense, because the oldest Japanese religion is shintou, which has priests, not shaman.
The drawing quality is high, but you're using too many techniques on the same page in some cases, and it can look rather messy. You need to learn when to stop adding to a page and leave it be. Sometimes less is more.
You need guttering between your panels. just lines between panels only works if it's either a shoujo style page without too much heavy tone and detail close to the panel edges, if the whole page is very light or white, or if there's a very strong contrast between the panels, ie. One is a white background, the other black. Your work as too much detail and heavy greys for you yo get away with just lines, you need full borders or the panels just bleed into each other and look confusing like page 1, where it looks like a really weird cityscape with flat buildings at the front, because you can't see the panel border easily.

wow, what a comment!

thanks for the great critque, ill try to keep that all in mind and fix the errors ^^;

the comic has updated!

updated again ^.^;