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ccs1989 at 6:54PM, July 8, 2006

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http://www.drunkduck.com/Assassin_Assassin/index.php
This brings us up to 82 comic pages here, my friends. All full color and improving in their art and coloring capabilities.

Critique away! (And read the other 2 chapters!)

http://ccs1989.deviantart.com

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Huxley at 8:25PM, July 8, 2006

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One thing that bugged me about this comic was the backrounds. They were WAY too dull for my taste. But seeing the last page you did that had buildings I was satisfied since you put more work into them. I think you should work on anatomy(especially hands, and lining up eyes) and poses more now.

But me being a fan from the old days when this comic first started and seeing the improvement you have had I know your gonna work out all of the minor problems.

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lukee at 10:39PM, July 8, 2006

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Shweet.

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ccs1989 at 7:18AM, July 9, 2006

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Thanks Huxley. Yeah, backgrounds. That's important. Also I'm gonna use more contrast in my art to up how things looks. Keep readin!

Lukee- Glad you like it.

BTW, Page 3 of Chapter 3 updated.

http://ccs1989.deviantart.com

"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
-Henry David Thoreau, Walden

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