My first webcomic to make it beyond page 3! I'm so proud! T^T
Short summary: Arson is a pyrokinetic, he can set things on fire by simply touching them. This can be pretty troublesome but also come in handy when fighting crime and whatnot in Caranda City. He and his twin sister both work for ALK, the largest corporation in Caranda, a country ruled not by a government, but by the consumers.
I guess you could call it action/noir, but with some supernatural stuff blended in, as well as romance, drama, comedy and whatever..
There's a not a lot of pages up yet, but I'm working on it (like crazy x_x). This is mainly an experiment for me, to test my skills and diciplin. But so far it's been a succes =D
Please read and tell me what you think. Constructive critique is VERY much appreciated!
And oh yeah, the link =P
http://www.drunkduck.com/Arsonite/
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[CRIT] Arsonite - Feel the fire?
Arson
at 1:26PM, May 6, 2006
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misterpopculture
at 1:43PM, May 6, 2006
I absolutely love the color scheme. It seems very much a reference to fire which creates light as well as shadow, hence the black. The humor seems slighty out of place at times but the story itself has me hooked. I can't wait to see what else happens! You've got yourself a new reader!
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:04PM
Arson
at 2:44AM, May 27, 2006
Uhm.. monthly bump? XD Even though it's only been 20 days but wth. Page 9 was uploaded yesterday, and page 10 will be tomorrow most likely (it's done but I still have to text it =D).
And uh, please, I am in fact looking for critique, so please tell me what you think and be honest. Just say it, I can handle it! *hides under covers*
And uh, please, I am in fact looking for critique, so please tell me what you think and be honest. Just say it, I can handle it! *hides under covers*
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:02AM
Kiseki_kun
at 2:34AM, May 28, 2006
I think the art style here is very nice and totally matches up with the story. I can't really give any critique because I don't see anything wrong with it :) Keep it up!
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ccs1989
at 7:26AM, May 28, 2006
Interesting, but lose the disclaimer thing or post it in the authors notes. It's distracting.
http://ccs1989.deviantart.com
"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
-Henry David Thoreau, Walden
"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
-Henry David Thoreau, Walden
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:37AM
Arson
at 10:32AM, May 28, 2006
Okay, so I removed the pages that weren't a part of the comic. I'm going to reupload some of it on seperate pages. Hopefully it will be less confusing now ..
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:02AM
Arson
at 5:35PM, June 7, 2006
Well, comic has been updated.. a few times. I update with 2 pages every sunday now.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:02AM
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