Overall pretty good, the key elements are there and the art has a gloomy style that fits the feel of the story.
The lack of SFX... not convinced it works here. It can work but the art isn't clear enough to pull it off. Some of the panels are hard to tell what is going on, you can work it out and most are fine but a few fall flat.
Look up perspective tutorials and work on anatomy a bit and you should start to see some big improvements.
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