Maybe some input would help.
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Thanks!!
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[Crit] Puff The Magic Daddy has lost it's way
Bug Eater
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Priest_Revan
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As you know, I've been reading your stuff and I haven't been giving it the best of scores (:()
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I think you should just clean it up a bit, watch for that 4th wall (I think that's what it is called), and work on the spelling.
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I think you should just clean it up a bit, watch for that 4th wall (I think that's what it is called), and work on the spelling.
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