Hi, I just started making sprite comics and I really need an expert opinion.

Ok First of all I'm guessing the one you wanted some input on was Resistance. From the two I read the graphics of the comic are pretty good quality. Your dialogue though is a bit rough. It's hard to really connect with the characters without any real background. There is no real hook. You want people to get invested in your characters and the two you've shown so far have yet to do that. So you might want to make a prologue or even an introduction that pulls people in. But other then that it's a good start.

Ok, I see what youre saying. So, I should develop my protagonists more, by using a possible flashback or a brief expose?