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[Crit/Plug] Wings of a God- A sci-fi comic about when things that shouldn't happen do
RDraconis at 9:13PM, April 26, 2008
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A sci-fi/fantasy comic with a furry-esque cast that's just started it's second chapter. Yes, I'm really this bad at describing my own comics.

Um... crit's more appreciated on layout/dialogue, as the art is a year or two old in places. Although, hey, if there's something that just drives you insane and you feel compelled to tell me to NEVER do again, go ahead. Chances are I agree whole-heartedly. Thanks. :)
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Druchii at 8:04AM, May 5, 2008
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RDraconis
Main Page: http://www.drunkduck.com/WoaG/
First Page: http://www.drunkduck.com/WoaG/index.php?p=372200

A sci-fi/fantasy comic with a furry-esque cast that's just started it's second chapter. Yes, I'm really this bad at describing my own comics.

Um... crit's more appreciated on layout/dialogue, as the art is a year or two old in places. Although, hey, if there's something that just drives you insane and you feel compelled to tell me to NEVER do again, go ahead. Chances are I agree whole-heartedly. Thanks. :)


Need more time to read through it all, but I think the panel layouts could be a bit more cohesive. There were a few that I read the wrong panel out of order because the angle of a panel drew my eye elsewhere.
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