I started on this comic on about Christmas. It's mainly about a guy named Abe, trying to keep an evil war mongering army called The Royal Army from taking taking over what's left of earth. I haven't been running it long but update it weekly and am open to any criticism you have. Anyway here , enjoy.

Hm. Two recommendations for ya.

First, increase the font size. It's extremely small, bordering on fine print in places.

Second, you're probably going to want to take some more time editing all those little distortions on the page out. I'm guessing those'r dust marks on your scanner glass maybe? At first, I thought it was some grainy atmospheric wind effect but then I noticed it was just all over the place, regardless of where anyone was. I have a similar thing on my old scanner. I just erase em in Photoshop.

Chernobog
Hm. Two recommendations for ya.

First, increase the font size. It's extremely small, bordering on fine print in places.

Second, you're probably going to want to take some more time editing all those little distortions on the page out. I'm guessing those'r dust marks on your scanner glass maybe? At first, I thought it was some grainy atmospheric wind effect but then I noticed it was just all over the place, regardless of where anyone was. I have a similar thing on my old scanner. I just erase em in Photoshop.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on that. I don't have Photoshop but I have GIMP, but anyway I'll get rid of the scanner dust when I get the chance.