Its a simple, seemingly peaceful comic. a little bit like disney.

I think i came here about two monthes ago but didnt write "crit" on the title (coz i didnt understand the english...)This time i would like ppl to give me some advices:)


http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Lamp/

Not sure why, but I really like the art style for your comic. It's has such a simple look to it, but I know there's more to it.

I think you need to write bigger, maybe. I don't have much of a problem reading it, but I know people who would literally have an extremely hard time reading the comic.

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You also need to update.

Thanks!:) And i'll see what i can do with the size of pages. I'm working on the book4 now and it's half way done...only i dont know how long it'll take for me to finish the other halfXP

well, to be blunt, your inking and perspective need a lot of work. but you've got a very noticable style and it's cool to see something with that hint of ethnicity. it realy helps it stand apart from any other kind of fairy tale.

mm i guess i better draw in different perspectives. Thanks for commenting:)