PLot: story is about a boy that confronts a kid that was rumored to have screwed his girlfriend. the story ends in a very twisting unusual way.


http://www.drunkduck.com/Serves_You_right/index.php?p=666852

It's a manga i came up with earlier in the week. it was originally supposed to be like one of those Korean comics with the really long pages. But i couldn't get it like that so i did it regular. i came up with this manga when i was sorta irritated.
and the idea crossed my mind so i had to catch it before it slipped. and this is the result.

Please crit the story, and art. mostly the story i want to get my skills in story UP