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[Crit/Plug] Rated Douk
DOUK at 7:59PM, April 6, 2009
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http://www.drunkduck.com/Rated_Douk/

There is my Comic. I'm really hoping for some critical feedback on it, I accept any criticism, so long as it doesn't involve me dieing in some way.

I'll try to update this as I update the comic, I think I can see how much better I'm getting flipping through all my unposted comics :)
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legueu at 10:18AM, April 7, 2009
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I like it. The only thing I could say is that swearing for nothing is not making the comic funnier. In fact it bring down the quality of your comic. Except for that there is really nice stuff in there.
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DOUK at 1:40PM, April 7, 2009
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Thats good stuff Legueu, I know it seems unnecessary but I tried to make it known that he was a bad mouthing character. I'll try to tone it down though :)
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Hawk of Rawk at 7:47AM, April 8, 2009
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Needs more swears.
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DOUK at 9:58PM, April 12, 2009
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I feel like my ego has been ripped out, stomped on, then eaten by an alligator.

Oh wait thats my heart. MY HEART!
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DOUK at 4:08PM, April 13, 2009
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New comic up you wonderful wonders.

:).... t(-,-t)........ :D
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DOUK at 5:59AM, July 5, 2009
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Its been a while and I got to say I've improved. If someone could confirm that (or display evidence against it, whatever), I'd like it. Its hard to develop your talent if no ones around to judge it.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:13PM

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