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snark at 7:29PM, April 16, 2007
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Incessent swearing! Unrealistic plots! Poorly penned dialogue! Inconsistent artwork! All this and more at Project Mango!

Immerse yourself in the epic story of a woman who must conquer the world to get her house back! Cheer her on as she fights fearsome foes such as budget assasins and annoying teens from remote fishing villagers!

Waste five minutes of your life at www.drunkduck.com/project_mango !!!

Oh, and we've got homeless ninjas
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Ryu_The_Fox at 7:46PM, April 16, 2007
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I read the first page and i think that exessive use of the "F" word is not cool. Anyone with a normal mind wouldnt go cussing so much(im not talking about you).
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snark at 11:54PM, April 16, 2007
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Yeah, I have to admit that there is a nearly excessive amount of swearing, though I am trying to limit it to the main character as its meant to be part of her personality.

Nevertheless, hope I didn't offend you or anything :)
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Ryu_The_Fox at 11:56AM, April 17, 2007
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Yeah, I have to admit that there is a nearly excessive amount of swearing, though I am trying to limit it to the main character as its meant to be part of her personality.

Nevertheless, hope I didn't offend you or anything :)

dont worry, im not offended or anything. maybe you as the story progresses you could cut down the swearing used little by little.
like the main characters changing a bit.(everyone changes)
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