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[crit/plug] MMORPC
Encicra at 6:05AM, Nov. 22, 2006
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Hello everyone, only 3 strips so far but I feel the comics off to a good start.

Http://drunkduck.com/MMORPC

What you guys think?
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Darth Mongoose at 6:34AM, Nov. 22, 2006
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I like the artistic style, simple, neat and distinctive, suits the mood well. Som of the dialogue occasionally makes it hard to follow what's going on, but other than that it seemed pretty fun. You'll have to be careful with this type of comic, not to end up as just another 'The N00b' clone, but it looks to be not going that way so far. The thing with the jumping around and begging in underwear made me laugh, the best gamer comics are generally the ones that are of observations that players will recognise and relate to.
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Encicra at 6:42AM, Nov. 22, 2006
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My comic will in no way ever be like "the noob comic" Trust me, part of the reason for making this comic is my dislike for that one lol.
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Crazy Dutchman at 6:10AM, Nov. 24, 2006
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I also like the style, but the faces can use a little more expression. It isn't hilarious, but quite funny and I'm curious for the next page.
So, it's a fine comic!
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Encicra at 9:19AM, Nov. 24, 2006
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Yea i've been considering a few ways to improve facial expressions. I'll probably attempt one in the next strip.
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Encicra at 7:32AM, Nov. 28, 2006
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It's been a while since my last update. So I'm hoping to get the next strip up by tomorrow or earlier the next day...been busy...stupid work lol.
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Mr Mustard Seed at 10:52AM, Nov. 28, 2006
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I like the general tone of the comic as well as the steady hand creating the graphics and such ... yes, the characters could show additional expression, but that also makes it necessary to show more emotion in the dialog ... the dog chasing its tail thing ... or chickens and eggs. If you're comfortable doing it in the current style, stick with it as you practice enlarging the style on the side ... Your first impression is solid enough.
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Krensada at 3:25AM, Nov. 30, 2006
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I enjoy the humor of this comic. its kinda like what i went through playing everqust for the 17 minutes that i did. the art itself i cannot say anything about cause its severely stylized.
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Encicra at 10:00AM, Nov. 30, 2006
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The comic takes place in an mmorpg like universe where the characters of my comic in theory are player avatars that control themselves but don't know that they are not real. Everything in the world is real to them.

So while it takes place inside a game setting, I didn't want to make it as much gaming humor as I wanted it to be as though the chars are living their lives.

There should be a new strip of it up late tonight. Sometime after primetime tv.
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Encicra at 6:51AM, Dec. 1, 2006
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There, finally uploaded #4.

Hopefully you like it.
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Encicra at 8:23AM, Dec. 12, 2006
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Sorry for not updating this week, yet. Work has been a real pain. They up'd my hours so I have less time to spend on strip worth then usual.
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gradiate at 4:05PM, Dec. 12, 2006
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You've got some great beginnings to an awesome comic. The art is simple, which I love, and the humor is fantastic. I actually like these type of comics; you don't have to know what the previous comic was; you can just read it.

I love it.
I'm with ZAC!!
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Encicra at 9:22AM, Dec. 25, 2006
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Ok so good news, the strip has been written and im working on the concept sketches as i write this. SO..the 5th strip should be up today or tomorrow if all goes according to plan.
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Encicra at 1:35PM, Jan. 26, 2007
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Lol, sorry for the delay but strip #5 is now up!

Tell me what you think.
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Chad_Gnuuuh at 3:12AM, Jan. 27, 2007
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Love the art, love the idea. You have a lot of potential. The only thing I can suggest is to come up with more varied jokes. It seems like after the first strip, all 4 have ended on a "Telek is so stupid" joke. If you can come up with more jokes like the first one, and less "Blah blah blah plot blah story blah HAHAHA TELEK IS STUPID" strips, it will be quite amazing.

I'm faving it by the way, I intend to keep a close watch on it. Good luck!
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Encicra at 5:16AM, Jan. 27, 2007
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Atm im trying to display each characters personalities. Now that Telek is passed out there is going to be some strips of just Clear Mage and Paladin to develop a character for them. Once I feel i've drilled the individual characters into my audiences brains i'll move on to the actual story and more/differnt jokes. Which will be soon.
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Chad_Gnuuuh at 9:29AM, Jan. 27, 2007
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In that case, Hoorah!
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Encicra at 9:34AM, Jan. 29, 2007
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I registered a domain for it.

http://mmorpc.com
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Encicra at 6:46AM, Feb. 4, 2007
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If you like my comic, good news. I just uploaded strip #6.
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Encicra at 8:27AM, Feb. 11, 2007
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Just uploaded strip #7. Enjoy.

Tell me what you think.
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Shingo at 12:31PM, Feb. 11, 2007
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Very funny, the part where the fairy drowned was hilarious in my opinion, Telek is so stupid! lol!
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Encicra at 10:45AM, Feb. 13, 2007
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He is stupid but he packs quite a punch.
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acadia at 11:00AM, Feb. 13, 2007
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I went through the (admittedly small) archives and i'm impressed, to be honest. Youve got some pretty solid writing going on and the art (though very static) seems solid. I guess the art style suits the story, but i prefer more dynamic movements.

Good stuff.

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Encicra at 12:42PM, Feb. 13, 2007
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Lol yea the archives is pretty small atm but for a weekly updated strip means its been around for nearly 2 months. Not counting the the 3 months it sat dormant between strip 3 and 4.

The art is suppose to be a simple brightly/richly colored style. I'm still tweaking it though, mainly background atm but i'll eventually get around to everything.
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acadia at 3:24PM, Feb. 13, 2007
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Heh, mine's pretty new as well, so don't think that i was bustin on you for a small archive. I've only been around since December, myself.

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PaparazziPulse at 12:08PM, Feb. 14, 2007
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Your comic is very amusing. The art is kinda minimalistic, but you don't need thoroughly detailed art to have a good laugh. I like the storyline, too. Keep up the good work.
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Encicra at 6:36AM, March 13, 2007
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Sorry to those of you who read my strip, i've been quite distracted lately but strip #8 has been scripted and provided I get the time it will be up within the next two days.

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Encicra at 7:59AM, March 18, 2007
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Strip #8 is finally up. Enjoy. Tell me what you think.
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Encicra at 6:24AM, March 22, 2007
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I finally got around and added a forums area for the comic.

Which you can check out here: http://www.drunkduck.com/community/?comic_id=8822

Its bare atm, need people to start posting lol. I'll be posting a fair amount in there soon aswell.
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Encicra at 12:01PM, March 25, 2007
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Ok I've made some link images for the people who want to be awsome and get the word out on mmorpc lol.





Thanks, if you do link I'll love you. Seriously.

Be sure to link it to the address: Http://www.mmorpc.com

and not the drunkdunk url.

News like update:
Ok well MMORPC is probably going to go on its regular hiatus type interval between updates exepct this time im going to be puttinga ton of work into making new strips. So, when the next update arrives there will be about 10 new strips waiting to go up, which will update twice weekly for 5 weeks, giving me a strip buffer zone to hopefully destory the illusion of a hiatus. so two woots for that.
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