This is my new comic! It is about a group of teenagers who are taken away from there home planets by an evil army. This army is led by a man who hopes to take over the city (which doesnt have a name yet. I'm working on that.)and then possibly much much more. These teenagers find themselves teaming together to defeat the common enemy. I know I only have one page but at least tell me what you think of my idea. I just wanted to get it out in the open so check it out and comment or message me and tell me what you think.
Linkage http://www.drunkduck.com/Future_Legion/

I like it so far. Nice concept, simple, but original and with plenty of possible scenarios. The first page is a nice size for the screen and neatly drawn, and I'm very impressed by the competant and consistantly good pencil crayon colouring. Not just anybody can use pencil crayons that smoothly!
Okay, onto the constructive criticism. Firstly, not all your panels are perpendicular, it's particularly aparent on the bottom line of the page, and the space in-between the two middle panels. I'd recommend getting yourself a drawing board or t-square if you don't want to spend ages with set squares trying to get those edges to line up. It's not a big problem or anything, but it'd just make the comic look subtly more professional. Second thing is make a bit more of a plan of where you're going. You don't have to tie yourself down, just plan out maybe the first storyarc or so, make sure you know names of people and places and note them down. It makes things easier in the long run, and allows you to foreshadow later events or drop clues.
Looking pretty good so far, I hope to see this comic take off!

You seem to know a lot about this kind of thing. I do want to get a T-square and I probably will soon but for now It's just me and my ruler. Ha ha. Also, I will definitely take your advice on the whole planning thing. I see how it could help. Thanks a lot! :)

Is that done with crayons/coloring pencils? Whatever you used, you pulled it off well. Nice comic.