Hey guys, we are new to the whole webcomic scene. So please help us out by reading and critiquing our comic. Suggestions and comments are encouraged, so please feel free to leave a comment.
Thank you for your time, we hope to update every couple of days. So please come back for new comics.
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[Crit/Plug] Common Sense
CommonSense at 4:29PM, Nov. 4, 2006
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Rich at 8:05PM, Nov. 4, 2006
The coloring appears very flat and your anatomy is sort of off. But it's ok! We know you will practice and be really good soon! Practice makes perfect! LOL! <3!
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Tantz Aerine at 7:28AM, Nov. 5, 2006
Looks promising! I would suggest though, not to include too much dialogue in one panel. Spread it out in two or three panels, so you get a chance to draw more variation in expressions as the two people talk and interact. That would make it more interesting and coax imagination much more.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:06PM
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