Hi everyone, I'm Steven Severt of Rival Comics and I run a weekly updated webcomic here and on my site, www.rival-comics.com and i'd like to draw some more attention to it and get some criticism, whether it's good or bad, to help make the comic better and keep readers interested. Basically, the comic starts at the end of John Parker's life, then spends the rest of the series explaining the events of the first story by randomly showing tidbits of his life, in non-sequential order, so that the readers can eventually understand the character, his motivations, and what eventually led to what happens at the beginning/end of the comic. Any criticism is welcome!