Ookay, this is Anthem ! I'm looking for feedback, more about the visual then the story (these early stages are misleading ^-^).

I'll probly bump this thread once a month as it continues to grow. Thank you for looking! ^_^

Monthly bump! Hey you should look cause it's my birthday! =D

There's a lot of potential there! You've got a good style that will only continue to develop as you keep drawing.

My one real criticism is that it can be confusing. It took me a moment to realize the comic reads from right to left, manga style. I'd honestly suggest you either put up a note somewhere or just switch to left to right if only because the majority of webcomics out there use that format. Also, tails on your word balloons would be nice. Sometimes it was a touch hard to tell who was speaking, exactly.

I fav'd the comic! I'm interested in reading more.

=o Thank you! Up in the banner pic I wrote "Best enjoyed and more coherent right to left" I was worried at first that the lettering there might not be clear enough, guess I'll rework that so it stands out more. (and I put it in the title of this thread =x)

With speech bubbles I was going to do them normal at first, but as I was skimming through some manga (for a refresher on page layout, it's been a while since I've read any) I took a small note that some artists don't add tails to their speech bubbles. For the most part through those series I knew who was talking but could remember a time in each where I got a little confused.

Monthly bump =)

I don't have an excuse to make you look this month XD So just do it!
Please =D

It's been a while since I've bumped =o

Anthem's moving along nicely, now in chapter 2! =)