The Comic
Angelfish is the story of a girl with no memory, the people she meets, and the world and circumstances she is inextricably connected to.
A sci-fi/fantasy webcomic about being lost, getting found, and finding the way home.
Angelfish .
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Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated :)
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[CRIT/PLUG] Angelfish, a sci-fi/fantasy webcomic.
Luminous
at 6:36PM, March 18, 2008
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Luminous
at 9:07AM, April 25, 2008
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It's been more than a month, plus I updated the comic today, so I'm bumping this thread up. :)
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Luminous
at 2:29AM, May 29, 2008
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Monthly bump.
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flapjack1995
at 5:38AM, May 29, 2008
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Well, I like the comic. Especially the art.
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spiritmonkey
at 12:08PM, June 15, 2008
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I also like this comic
Yay Angelfish!!
Yay Angelfish!!
Timmy And the Bleach
There are many things in this world that are uncertain
I'd say I'm one of them
But I'm not sure
There are many things in this world that are uncertain
I'd say I'm one of them
But I'm not sure
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Luminous
at 10:51PM, Aug. 8, 2008
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Thanks, guys!
(I keep forgetting about this thread, haha.)
Another bump. :D
(I keep forgetting about this thread, haha.)
Another bump. :D
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Luminous
at 1:27AM, Sept. 19, 2008
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Bumping this topic as it's been over a month. :]
Also, I'm looking for constructive crit, so if you have anything to say about my comic, go ahead and post it either here or in the comments on the comic itself. ^^
Also, I'm looking for constructive crit, so if you have anything to say about my comic, go ahead and post it either here or in the comments on the comic itself. ^^
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Luminous
at 3:56PM, Dec. 5, 2008
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AF updated today, plus it's been a while since I bumped this thread... So, bump :)
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Ludeshka
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The art improves a whole bunch as the story progresses.
At first it was a bit inexpressive, but by chapter three they're all emoting a lot
better. I think the story is quite interesting too!
One thing I'd say that needs more work is the backgrounds. Perhaps they're a bit too simple. (I know, backgrounds are very hard to draw, but hey, you said we should crit this) And maybe a bit more of attention to the anatomy.
At first it was a bit inexpressive, but by chapter three they're all emoting a lot
better. I think the story is quite interesting too!
One thing I'd say that needs more work is the backgrounds. Perhaps they're a bit too simple. (I know, backgrounds are very hard to draw, but hey, you said we should crit this) And maybe a bit more of attention to the anatomy.
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Luminous
at 5:01PM, Feb. 17, 2009
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This reply is kinda late, but anyway... Thanks, Ludeshka :) I agree, my backgrounds need work.
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Bumping this up since it's been... what... two months? Plus I updated the comic yesterday - three new pages.
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Bumping this up since it's been... what... two months? Plus I updated the comic yesterday - three new pages.
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Luminous
at 7:17PM, June 19, 2009
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Comic has been updated.
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