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[Crit plug]War of the worms
Egnio at 5:56PM, Aug. 30, 2006
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Yep. As I already have said before, I make sprite comics, and I htink that this serie is the only one that I'll put in Drunk Duck, since I think that I'll update this one faster... and this one actually have no recolor or edits of Sonic (neither had another serie I made, but I have not updated that one in months)

Whatever, the comic is about a worm named Rupert that wants to get revenge because an evil colonel, after making a group called "The Neciz" that wanted to rule the world, destroyed the village where he lived and made him a prisoner.

Well, this comic is being made with sprites 100% custom by me... well, 95% is you don't consider totally custom that I copied other sprite's colors instead of looking for similar colors, and the fact that some weapons were rotated using Game Maker.

Whatever, I warn kids, that this comic WILL have strong language, and on a not-so-far future, blood and violence (for a future comic, a worm will spill blood after being shot IN THE FACE... but well, since those are sprites, this is not that realistic...)

Well, I hope that I'm not making this thread so soon, since, so far, there are only 4 comics.

http://www.drunkduck.com/War_of_the_worms/index.php?p=83340

Criticism, suggestions and such are accepted.
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Loki at 9:25PM, Aug. 30, 2006
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Some of the pages feel too busy but otherwise this is a nice and orginal use of sprites. Good job. I'd like to see where this goes.

:D
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Egnio at 3:35AM, Aug. 31, 2006
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What do you mean with "feel too busy"?
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Loki at 9:45AM, Aug. 31, 2006
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There's a lot of action and colors on your pages. Cramed together too closely they can make the comic hard to read. I wouldn't worry about it too much though as your comic is very good already.
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Egnio at 11:37AM, Aug. 31, 2006
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And I thought that the bad shading on the backgrounds made it look colorless :roll:
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