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[CRIT Please] Something Like Life... - a Comic with a healthy archive
bryan at 1:18AM, July 12, 2007
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Hello there and think you for considering spending your time on my comic... as much as I'd like to say 'it's great' or, 'read this before you die, you'll be glad you did', I can not, as I cannot attest to what people think of it.

If you wouldn't mind, I would genuinely love your honest and even handed comments about the comic. Please click the banner below and do tell me what you think :)

I take criticism very well, so don't be afraid to tell me what you really think.

Thank you for your time!
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bryan at 11:40PM, Aug. 22, 2007
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Bump-age so I don't clutter the forums... and no one lurvs me :(

I'd appreciate a crit or two... thanks!
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n_y_japlander at 8:38AM, Aug. 24, 2007
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Hey!
Howz it goin' ?
I love youe comic! I faved it right after I read it the first time!
But, if you really want some crits, here it goes....
I liked how the first comics in this series looked. All the lines were the same black, dark, solid! However, I like the later lay out. The newer stuff is too light (pencily like). the matter of the word bubbles and after graphics (details, t-shirts, ect) are darker, takes away from your kick @ss style.
there I said it...
I also must say again, that I love your comic!
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bryan at 9:21PM, Aug. 25, 2007
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Hey there! Thanks for the criticisms! I really do enjoy honest words.

You're totally right, the 'newer' stuff is fairly light by comparison (as the older stuff is inked), so I'm going through my archives and darkening any pages that are too light... it's taking a long while though, so yeah...

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