The crit bit:

Naive

Check it out, place points of improvements.


The plug bit: I need cameos for my comic. If you want me to draw one of your characters on Naive to appear as a guest, just reply here. They cameos/guests are needed to act as the general public. On a bus. But not just any bus, oh no no, a double decker bus!.

You've got a month to reply, as I'm going on holiday and won't be back until September.

I'm really not one to talk about things that a hand-drawn comic might need as I still know almost nothing about drawing myself... even though I'm taking art lessons from my friend...

But in my opinion, I don't think I'd find much wrong with Naive. It's one o' my favorite archives to re-read... so keep up the good work, I guess.

As far as yer cameo thing goes... I don't quite know how that'd work anyway... so I won't say nothing about meself for it.