I have had my comic Raw Fish here at Drunk Duck for over a year, There are over 100 (actual) comic pages. You guys have given me over 3000 comments (^U^) and have shown me a great deal of love... but now I'm asking for you to be honest with me, give me some tough love!!!!

I would like to know how I can improve Raw Fish so it will stand out! Anything goes, but please be constructive...
A post of "This sucks!" is not constructive, let me know why it sucks, and how it can become unsucky!

The reason for this request is simply because here in the land of the rising sun, with all the western influence and western people here, there is a lack of comic strips about Japan (in English). I will be compiling, redrawing, and writing letters about Raw Fish to get it into English publications here in Japan. I want it to be perfect! I'm happy with most of the work that gets posted here, but you hold the true opinion, the one that can make Raw Fish better. So, please let me have it!!!

Thanks
Corey

As I'm revising all my comics in the archive, and creating new ones, now is the time to let me know what you guys think!
Please help me out, and let me know how I can better Raw Fish.

Corey

I can't really think of any way you could improve.

Well, I can't really think of much critique. It's an entertaining comic with good enough art. I can't really critique the art also, since it's more stylized than anything.

The one thing that really gets my goat about the comic, though, is the spelling and grammar in most of the strips. I think what you should do before you post, try spell checking and check your grammar too. Since there are some times I can't quite understand what is being said (when English is spoken, haha).

Other than that, your comic is fine. Keep it up, I really like it. :)

Well I have had a couple of hits on my request for critiques... and they are much appreciated!
But time to push some more!

Beautifully done if I do say so myself!