A comic I hand drew, but my friend Jory (warlord) is posting because I don't have a scanner.

It's about a couple of mercenaries trying to make due, but they get caught up in a rather intricate plot involving an age old cult with a habit of bieng nasty.

Keep in mind that thepages are made on standard 8 by 11 pieces of paper and stretched by the scanner. they should be updated 3 times a week but occasionlly my collegue forgets. the Inking gets a tremendous boost in quality come page 26 (I switch from sharpie fine point to microm/brush pen)but page 26 wont be up for a while. Its still very young.

Hope you enjoy!

http://www.drunkduck.com/WIN/

-Bump- for attention =(

What do you use to ink? It kinda looks like a sharpie. I'd suggest using some Micron Pigma's. You can get a better line quality. It's still a little early for me to say anything else about the story.

The thick body outline is stylish but it also makes things look a little cramped in the backgrounds that you drew.

Also, in the comic called "rivals arrive", the last panel should be "you're" not "your".

Finally, the perspectives seems a little off in some panels. But that'll come with practice.

Hope that helps.

Yea I've made all most of the pages already, and around 26 is when I switched to Microns and I loved it. they are rather amazing.

Also since my handwriting and grammatical skills are horrendous I was worried no one would be able to read it. I'm going to as my friend "warlord" if he can star updating again. its been a while.