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Would Anyone read this comic if it came out???
mamaya94 at 9:46PM, Aug. 22, 2009
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This is a action&Thriller fiction comic based on a history (So it's a faction)
Would you read it if it came out???(There's a rumour it will be mase as a movie)
Main Comic


Finished one
Hanged Doll:Where does your memory begin???
http://www.drunkduck.com/hanged_doll/

Resting one
30 years:30 years of pain and suffering...Time for payback
http://www.drunkduck.com/30_Years/
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Ryuthehedgewolf at 10:10PM, Aug. 22, 2009
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I think this is the wrong place to talk about it.

However, I do believe one of the mods could move this over to...Comic Discussion?
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Skullbie at 11:00PM, Aug. 22, 2009
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If there weren't 10+ spelling/grammar errors a page i guess
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skoolmunkee at 1:44AM, Aug. 23, 2009
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It's kind of hard to judge based on a cover image. It doesn't tell us anything about the comic. Even your description isn't very descriptive. :]
   IT'S OLD BATMAN
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Hyena H_ll at 2:40AM, Aug. 23, 2009
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I mean, I'm not sure what it's about, nor do I have a good idea of the genre. (If you hadn't have mentioned it, that is.) The dialogue isn't particularly catchy, as far as making me curious as to what's up with this 30 year stuff. And the image is a bit static- it's just some people standing there. It falls short of "mysterious" and ends up just being vague.
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harkovast at 5:16AM, Aug. 23, 2009
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Mamaya94
This is a action&Thriller fiction comic based on a history (So it's a faction)


That description does not really make any sense and the comic page has numerous typos.
Honestly?
No, I would not read this, thought that does not mean no one would.

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ttyler at 5:25AM, Aug. 23, 2009
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I'm confused. What is your concept about again? Am I missing something or is my frontal lobe deformity acting up again?
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JustNoPoint at 6:00PM, Aug. 23, 2009
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If it is like the other comics from this author then mamaya94 is translating it to english. Maybe you should link people here to the original site so they can see what you'll be translating (if I'm correct)

I know you don't like to "spoil" the readers. But in these cases it would help a lot IMO :)

Read "The Devon Legacy".
A full color web comic updating daily on www.comicfury.com
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Chernobog at 6:06PM, Aug. 23, 2009
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No. The description describes nothing and there's the excessively long vertical dead space issue I find common in a lot of the comics you've translated.
 
 
"You tell yourself to just
enjoy the process," he added. "That whether you succeed or fail, win or
lose, it will be fine. You pretend to be Zen. You adopt detachment, and
ironic humor, while secretly praying for a miracle."
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patrickdevine at 9:29PM, Aug. 23, 2009
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I might, at the very least I'd give it a chance. Though I'll second some of the thoughts that've already been brought up like how there's a lot of empty space in this layout and the opening monologue doesn't really say anything at all. Honestly you could chop off everything above the title and get a cover image with the same effect.
http://www.iprc.org [iprc.org]
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idstudios at 10:22PM, Aug. 23, 2009
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I'm not trying to be mean but, truthfullt, the image you posted does not pique my curiosity in any way. I can tell this is meant to be taken seriously - but it's got lots of grammatical errors and it just leaves a person scratching their head. I need more.

I'm not trying to offend you.
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Doctor Shadow at 2:02AM, Aug. 24, 2009
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Based on the image that you posted, no. It doesn't grab my attention at all.
A Ronin writer, a masterless samurai of the written word...
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Chronicles_of_Wyrden/
Updating: Thursdays. Now in glorious Ink Wash and Water Soluble Pencil! Reva's note: This is not created digitally, it's all hand drawn and inked.
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Saint at 4:38AM, Aug. 24, 2009
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I'd have liked it better if you didn't have ???? where ? should be. Seriously this goes to everyone: If you want to have punctuation on a sentence, do it once, not 5 freaking times just so everyone knows it's a question or knows it's someone shouting.


Want to know how to draw the title character? Visit http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xvdGYD-fxNk !
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Doctor Shadow at 7:08AM, Aug. 24, 2009
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Even the Riddler knew to use only one ? ;)
A Ronin writer, a masterless samurai of the written word...
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Chronicles_of_Wyrden/
Updating: Thursdays. Now in glorious Ink Wash and Water Soluble Pencil! Reva's note: This is not created digitally, it's all hand drawn and inked.
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Kristen Gudsnuk at 12:18PM, Sept. 3, 2009
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I think you should try to get a native English speaker to look through your translated works before you post them... I took a glance at the other comic you translated, and it was difficult to tell what was happening.
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