DOOM: Repercussions of Evil

John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons.
"This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!"
So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons
"I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

I can show you some stuff that I've written. If you want I can PQ you some of it so let me know.

I've written a whole lot - both original fiction and fanfiction (I've got something like five original - and unedited - novels under my belt, and am working on a sixth and seventh, and I don't really want to think about how many words I've wasted on fanfic), and I've even butchered poetry once or twice.

I've posted some of it over here , but most of what's up there is so old it's gathering dust, and the only novel-length thing is rambly, unedited and complete and utter crap for the most part. >.> I only posted it because some people on another forum really, really wanted to read it.

... Most of it's pretty weird, too. o.O I know I'm a better writer today, but I'm not ashamed of what's up there.

I wrote a couple of things and put them on my devArt. For DA, you want to look for David-3000

This is clearly Art and Lit :)
Moving...

You'll check them out and do what? Criticise them, offer advice, or do you just want people to contibute stuff they've written? That's what this whole bloody subforum's for, stupid.

Old stuffs I wrote when I was in college. I can't recall exactly why I wrote it. Maybe it's because I wanted to learn how to write English properly.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2299803/1/