Well, I'm not going to judge the whole BL thing, but I have to hand it to you, your art is absolutely stellar. I know my brother, who is big on writing and poetry would probably tear the writing apart, I say it serves it's purpose.

I have to say so far I'm intrigued. And as IDrawWithAMouse stated the art is great. You have a good hook to start things off. Just stick with it and you should have a good comic going.

EDIT: NO MORE CRITS THANK YOU. :) I JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK ON THE INITIAL STYLE. I'M WORKING ON FIXING MY PROBLEMS AT THE MOMENT. When I feel my art has improved...I'll ask for more critique. Thank you all for being so helpful and PMng me with your thoughts. c:

However, if you do take a look at my comic, I'll still return the favor and check out yours! :3

Hello!

Latest comic. --------> http://www.drunkduck.com/Tracing_Ciel
This one being an action/adventure/romance story that's set in a sci-fi tweaked modern world. :]]
So I'd say this one's got just a little bit of everythign for everyone.

It is BL.
So Stray far far away if you'd like. :3