I'm very proud to announce issue #2 of The Devon Legacy is beginning to hit the net! After finishing a dual 1st issue it is so nice to go to issue 2!

Action is going to start picking up again as the aliens are now on earth!

Go to each issue here

Issue1-0
Issue 1-1
Issue 2

I forgot to put in the title. You can critique me if you wish.

Took me a minute to look through the archives, but pretty good stuff. The story is somewhat interesting, though it feels a bit DBZ-esque. That's to be expected with these kind of stories, y'know, people with powers and whatnot. Still, you put a lot of thought into this, from character design, to story, and even planning out your pages. I commend you on that.

Some things to consider while pushing forward. Just remember to check your proportions on your characters. Sizes in limbs and so forth vary from page to page. Not a whole lot, but that may be contributed by the natural skew your drawings have too. They kinda lean to the right, so I'm assuming you're right-handed. I used to have that problem too. An easy way to fix that is to just check you construction lines(if you use any) and also a little trick I picked up is slightly turning your paper as you draw to accommodate the skew.

Wow thanks for the critique!

Another good way to test if you have a skew is to flip your picture. I need to get back in the habit of this but since I update daily I get in a hurry at times. And yeah, I know how long their limbs should be. I really need to get better at proportions. And heights.

I hope it gets better as I go because I do try and keep these things in mind while drawing. I know it is no excuse and Quality > Quantity should be true.

My goal is to keep improving "while getting faster" though so my story can move along at a decent speed.

I'll surely be putting a bit more focus on these areas since others besides me can see it. Sometimes I wonder if I am too hard on myself and let things slide so I don't keep redrawing it over and over again =P