Hello everyone. I'm currently working on a Dead Rising 2 parody comic.

I'm a total comic making noob so you're going to have to bear with my noob mistakes and what not. I currently have 3 pages up (prologue and 2 story pages). I plan on updating 3-5 times a week. Go check it out and leave some feedback. Keep my noob status in mind though, and you can help me get through this difficult time. Let me know what you think.
The prologue is just there so I could see how uploading on this site works, its only one page anyway.
Page 1 is bad and un-funny.
Page 2 is where things kick off.

I have found a style I am sticking with in page 2.
So check it out and tell me what you think. http://www.drunkduck.com/Dead_Rising_2_Comic/index.php?p=810315
Cheers