So my comic has 'come back to life'. I wanted to make some sort of Zombie homage to that effect.

Effective? No?

Any critique?

hehe, looks pretty cool man.

Altered Beast was the coolest game ever.

I want instant steroids like what they have in that game, lol.

The only critique I'd have would be with the dirt. The way you've drawn it it looks almost like a liquid, like they're sitting up in a pool of mud. If you had bumps rising up from the ground and clumps of dirt scattered around it might look more like solid earth.

Ah! You're right! I hadn't even thought of that. Great suggestion, man!