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mishi_hime at 9:40AM, April 1, 2010
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Where the heck do I find a good group to redline me? It's like seriously non existent. And I need help with my horrible anatomy.
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:04PM
PIT_FACE at 1:04PM, April 2, 2010
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red line? never heard of it. what's it about? but if ya need help with anatomy, i'd be happy to help ya!
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:45PM
kyupol at 8:34AM, April 3, 2010
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I just think the head should be a little smaller. Unless you purposely made it as such.

Otherwise its fine to me.
NOW UPDATING!!!
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:27PM
Ryuthehedgewolf at 12:18PM, April 5, 2010
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mishi_hime
Where the heck do I find a good group to redline me? It's like seriously non existent. And I need help with my horrible anatomy.



Your doing it wrong.

Everybody knows that in comics, girls always have oversized boobs and hips.
c'mon.

get with the program.
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:16PM
alwinbot at 1:00PM, April 8, 2010
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If you want constructive criticism, then here we go.


The pose is rigid and awkward.
Shoulders should be more relaxed.
Boobs seem a little too perfect, but that's just me trying to be pessimistic.
Head seems gigantic when put on that frame of a body.
Hands look weird.
Read this comic. It is the greatest journal comic ever written and drawn. Trust me.
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:50AM

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