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Prime Rosa
wulfsaga at 10:54AM, March 30, 2010
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story that i develop again and again....

http://www.drunkduck.com/Prima_rosa/

Synopsis:
About flower fairy named vee that will decide fate of world according how she is grown up....

i dunno, the sotry concept change for almost 100 times, you can see the remnant of my idea on the my other comic...
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:52PM
BlkKnight at 8:38PM, March 31, 2010
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I'm guessing English isn't your first language. There's many grammatical errors (mostly missing 'a's, 'an's, 'the's, etc.) that are detracting from the read.
That's "Dr. BlkKnight" to all of you.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:26AM

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