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Pokemon Sinnoh Surfer: The best Pokemon webcomic so far?
Walrus
at 2:27PM, Oct. 13, 2007
Hey, I just started this webcomic today. Tell me what you think of it.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:45PM
Walrus
at 2:28PM, Oct. 13, 2007
Darn! The image won't show up on my computer! Can anyone else see it? If not go to my profile and click on my comic called: Pokemon Sinnoh Surfer.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:45PM
Priest_Revan
at 2:33PM, Oct. 13, 2007
No, I can't see it.
Now, you weren't very specific on whether you wanted critique or not, so I'm going to give it to you anyways.
To be honest, no, this is not the best pokemon webcomc so far. In fact, I don't think I've ever seen a good Pokemon based webcomic.
Now, you should really try to clean up the pages a bit. It's quite messy. The text is perfect, so no complaints there.
You may want to work on character design. Your current character is a little messy lookin' (unless that's done on purpose).
Ummm... I barely got the joke on today's comic. Not sure if it just went over my head or if it just wasn't funny. I don't know.
Overall, I may check it out again later.
Now, you weren't very specific on whether you wanted critique or not, so I'm going to give it to you anyways.
To be honest, no, this is not the best pokemon webcomc so far. In fact, I don't think I've ever seen a good Pokemon based webcomic.
Now, you should really try to clean up the pages a bit. It's quite messy. The text is perfect, so no complaints there.
You may want to work on character design. Your current character is a little messy lookin' (unless that's done on purpose).
Ummm... I barely got the joke on today's comic. Not sure if it just went over my head or if it just wasn't funny. I don't know.
Overall, I may check it out again later.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 2:48PM
Walrus
at 2:37PM, Oct. 13, 2007
the first and second ones aren't supposed to be funny. The comic won't be funny until another few more pages ahead.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:45PM
Walrus
at 4:03AM, Oct. 25, 2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:45PM
trevoramueller
at 11:12AM, Oct. 25, 2007
You might want to clean up your scans a bit in photoshop or another art program, so you don't get "paper shadows." It distracts from the artwork.
The lines are solid and dark, but you should put some backgrounds in there so the scene can be set and maintained.
Otherwise, it's not too bad.
The lines are solid and dark, but you should put some backgrounds in there so the scene can be set and maintained.
Otherwise, it's not too bad.
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last edited on July 14, 2011 4:33PM
Poke Alster
at 3:23PM, Oct. 28, 2007
^^ I agree its a good start to the comic but i wouldnt say it was the best pokemon webcomic so far
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:46PM
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