Hey, I have a webcomic. Do you want to see it? Yes? Well that's fantastic because I have a url to it right here!

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Scarlet_Robe/


Try to keep your crit in context. Yes the art is shitty, anyone with eyes can see that, but does it work for the type of comic it is representing. That is the kind of question you should probably ask yourself before pressing the "flame" button on your keyboard.

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Hey. What's up. Page 10 up.

Writing- You remind me of a young Dean Koontz. The strip where you reveal your true gender is reminiscent of a chapter in Deans masterpiece "Dark Rivers of the Heart" in which the stories protagonist recounts the trials and tribulations of androgyny. Both are brilliantly executed and portray a depth and understanding of the human condition that is uncommon in literature today. For one so young (pardon me for assuming) you have a remarkably firm grasp on the english language and a maturity far exceeding your years. The way you deal with tragedy and loneliness is a concern of mine. Although you write beautifully you tend to turn to self destructive tendencies rather quickly, yes people on the internet can be incredibly stupid, this is no reason to react in kind. Even if you can make the average person dance like a puppet doesn't mean you should. All together your work reflects a truly damaged yet incredibly sharp and observant mind. I'd like to read your thesis one day, it seems like it would be an interesting read.


Art
Interesting. It is appropriate throughout and there are several occasions in which the art dramatically improves the quality of the message. Any instance where "Charlie/Dhalia" is expressing extreme emotion or action the art flows wonderfully and conveys a strong feeling in the reader. The second panel in the strip you wrote about being found out to be female by your classmate gave me shivers when I saw it. Although it is sufficient as it is I would like to see more effort put in on a more consistent basis. Looking at your work it is apparent that you can draw well if you tried. Why don't you share your gift with the rest of us?


Forum Humor- It is clear that you are not actually attacking anyone in particular and are simply making light of generalities. The people that insult your work out of spite because of this should stop taking themselves so seriously. That being said, very funny in a darkly sinister kind of way. A little over the top in places but good natured in general.


I enjoyed this "journal" (that criticism is warranted I admit) and look forward to seeing your life unravel even farther as you continue to post.


Your depravity is captivating.