I would like some honest opinions on my urban graphic novel. Please read and tell me what you think. I will update twice a week, monday and friday. I don't have the expensive software to spice up my comic.......yet, but i hope to be getting up to speed soon, i just want to hear some first reactions. Thanks!!

Links are always helpful.

BlkKnight
Links are always helpful.

Just click on my avatar and you should be able to go right to my comic. Like i said, i'm new here so i have to work that one out.

Here ya go: The Stick Up Kids.

to post links: {url=http://www.drunkduck.com/THE__STICK_UP_KIDS/index.php?p=605363 }Linky Link{/url}. Just change the { to [ and ya got it.

I love the art- it's great, man. But the text is hard to read at times. Like the first page- I don't know if it needs to be bigger or you should choose a different font. But it seems almost, I dunno, blurry to me? Also your "I"s aren't capitalized, and often the text is askew and doesn't fit in your bubbles. Those kinds of things are my main gripes- makes it look unprofessional. But it's easy enough to redo.

Hyena H_ll
Here ya go: The Stick Up Kids.

to post links: {url=http://www.drunkduck.com/THE__STICK_UP_KIDS/index.php?p=605363 }Linky Link{/url}. Just change the { to [ and ya got it.

I love the art- it's great, man. But the text is hard to read at times. Like the first page- I don't know if it needs to be bigger or you should choose a different font. But it seems almost, I dunno, blurry to me? Also your "I"s aren't capitalized, and often the text is askew and doesn't fit in your bubbles. Those kinds of things are my main gripes- makes it look unprofessional. But it's easy enough to redo.

Thank you so much for that, i've been trying to put it together on a shoe string budget. The problem i have is that i originally wrote the dialogue in as i drew the comic and now i have to find a way to put professional looking bubbles over it.