Hi! Please help me peoples...please comment on my comic Occult War pw33ase? if u do i might make some fanart for ur comic

Okay... honesty time right? I have no idea what is going on story-wise. None. Nada. Zip. 4 pages in and I should know a little something-something. Artwork: A few pages/panels stand out as very promising. Page 4 is good. Page two, top-right panel is also good. But you've got, i dunno, like 5 different styles going on here. Think back to every comic book you've read: from cover to cover, there's just one style. And there's a reason for that. Too many styles distracts the reader. Pick one that you're good at and/or one that you like and go to town. Drawn the next 10 pages in that style. If you start to hate it, pick another then (instead of in the next panel like now).

When people think of comic artists, they think of their styles. The best have not just their own style but their OWN style. Draw in your OWN style and you will always have some fans. Always.

uh ill try...jus i realy didnt know where i was heading with it, bc i got new inking pens and all so it was expirementing, im going the cross hatcing all the way like panel 2 of page 2 and page 4, but pasge 3 seemed pretty consistent wth paghe 4, and ull get the story by second chapter..