i'm messing with some of the old pages by shifting their contrast and exposure and stuff like that. i only did up to the 3rd chapter and want to know if anyone likes it more or not.here's few examples.

Before:

After:


Before:

After:

Before:

After:

Whudda ya think? should i give the other pages the same treatment? it's pretty much what i'm doing to the newer pages already.

I think it's good you're cleaning up all the crud in the speech bubbles and making your lines less blurry but your darker colors are a bit to dark-i prefer the muted colors but you should clean the lines and speech bubbles.

When the lines are bolder you should definitely leave the colors a little more muted, but the popping colors help more like on the last two examples. :3

Personally, I looooove how it looks.
I mean, in the before and after.
But the after really brings out the color.

Good work! :D

I like the first one as the original. I think the other two benefit from the brighter colors, though- it makes things a bit easier to see.

allright, thanks a lot guys! tweaked the first one too much then. good to get some outside opinions.again, thanks!

I think it looks good with a greater contrast between light and dark, but the colours should remain muted.

I perfer the before myself, but then I'm close minded and resistant to change.

have tried digitally coloring them?
the contrast of the colored pencils really looks like your are playing with the contrast.
Your line art is solid.
fantastic illustrations but the coloring is distracting, IMO.

nah, i really dont have any means or really interets in digital coloring.but yeah, i was screwing around with the contrast a bit, and the exposure and saturation.