This is a comic Ive been making for a while now it stars blob people based on my freinds, I was just wondering can you people give me some advice, critisism or suggestions to make it better? :-D
www.drunkduck.com/messed_up
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
my messed up comic
josif
at 4:20PM, Aug. 31, 2006
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Your Reading Skills Have Increased By Two Points.
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Generic Human
at 5:28PM, Aug. 31, 2006
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Did you really write all of this stuff?
I'm pretty sure you didn't come up with this
one .
Cause, here it is.
And I'm positive you didn't come up with this or this . I know you said you wrote the material for those two...but you didn't. That was word for word from South Park.
There were a few in there that were very very close to gags from Family Guy as well.
It's a real turn off that you've stolen material. Come up with more original stuff.
I'm pretty sure you didn't come up with this
one .
Cause, here it is.
And I'm positive you didn't come up with this or this . I know you said you wrote the material for those two...but you didn't. That was word for word from South Park.
There were a few in there that were very very close to gags from Family Guy as well.
It's a real turn off that you've stolen material. Come up with more original stuff.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:34PM
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